Snow Eater

Could this be the last snow of the season?  I don’t know, but it’s likely.  Today’s hike was sunny and warmer, and over the next ten days, high temperatures are supposed to climb to near sixty.  Spring is nigh, and in the meantime, I’m nibbling on what might be my last snowball for a while.

I’m wondering when I’ll spot my first wildflower of the season.  Last year, it happened on March 9.

But today, I’ll share snow on branches…

Snow on the trail…

Snow off-trail…

And snow on the bank.

In a month, it’ll be planting time.  Looking forward to more garden goodness!  Tomatoes, potatoes, green beans, zucchini, and squash taste even better than snowballs, and are much more nutritious. ;)

Seen on a Snowy Mountain

Seen on my hike:  tree quadruplets…

Slimesicles…

Icicles in the creek branch…

And an odd, fibrous fungus.

I’m working on deep edits for Heart’s Chalice, my novel-in-progress, and my inner editor’s scissors are razor sharp.  Since I began revisions, I’ve lopped out almost thirty thousand words from the rough draft.

Yeah.  *whew*  That’s a lot of words.

Happily, I’m balancing my inner editor with my muse by writing flash fiction for Grace Notes, my short story blog.  Until recently, I didn’t think I could write flash.  As a novelist, I write long and copiously.

But that’s exactly the point:  by writing flash fiction, I’m learning how to say more with fewer words, and that not only hones my craft as a writer, it also gives me new, fun challenges week by week.

When it comes to creativity, never say never.  The sky’s the limit.

Announcement

From here on out, all flash fiction will be posted to Grace Notes, my new blog for that purpose.  Posts about hiking, gardening, generalized musings on writing and whatnot will remain here on Tennessee Text Wrestling.

Enjoy! :)

When Pigs Fly (flash fiction)

(I wrote this for Sunday Scribblings – more of Laurel and Nate, from my novel-in-progress Heart’s Chalice. These flash fiction pieces, though they take place before the main action of the novel, are not necessarily being written in chronological order. Another point of interest for this story:  it takes place in the late eighties, before digital cameras came along.)

“I know the perfect picture,” Laurel said. “Come on.” She led Nate into the house, and they found Mom sitting in the living room, reading a magazine.

Mom set her magazine aside. “Hi, kids.”

Laurel and Nate replied in unison.

“Hey, Mom.”

“Hi, Mrs. Nave.”

Nate took a seat on the couch, and Laurel approached Mom. “Look what Nate just gave me for my birthday.” She held out the silver, heart-shaped locket she wore around her neck. “Isn’t it gorgeous?”

Mom touched it, then moved her hand away. “It’s sweet.”

Rolling her eyes, Laurel joined Nate on the couch. The locket was infinitely better than “sweet”, but she wouldn’t argue. “It needs a picture,” she said. “Of Nate.”

“Well, I should think you have lots of those,” Mom said.

“Yeah, but I need one where his face is small enough to fit. Remember the picture you took of me and Nate standing by his car? When he got his license?”

Mom thought a moment, then nodded. “It should be in the envelope with the rest of that roll of film.”

“So where’s the envelope?”

“In my bedroom.” But Mom made no move to go get it. Instead, she studied Laurel and Nate as though she’d pressed them into a slide and put them under her mind’s microscope.

Something about the locket had gotten under Mom’s skin.

Laurel took Nate’s hand and gave him a sidelong glance. He looked much cooler than she felt. Was it grace under pressure? Goodness knew he’d had plenty of opportunities to perfect that over the years.

“Don’t you think you two are a little young to be so serious?” Mom asked.

“Oh, for Pete’s sake.  It’s a locket, not an engagement ring.” Mom didn’t have to know that Laurel and Nate talked about getting married when they were old enough. Maybe once they were out of college.

“You’ll be out of high school before you know it.” Mom fixed her gaze on Nate. “Have you thought about what you want to do with your life?”

Laurel squeezed Nate’s hand. I’m sorry, she thought at him. He squeezed her hand back. It’s okay, his squeeze said. This was her mom, after all. And parents could get nosy. Maybe Nate appreciated a nosy parent. His parents wouldn’t care if he tried to hitchhike to the North Pole on a polar bear.

“Well, Mrs. Nave,” Nate said, “Laurel and I are going to Southern Mountain State University, and you know I like to write stories–”

“Stories are no way to make a living,” Mom said.

As Laurel nibbled on her tongue, Nate said, patiently, “I want to become a science fiction novelist. And while I’m working on that, I plan to support myself by teaching.”

“Teaching doesn’t make money. You’re a smart young man. You ought to talk to Laurel’s dad about studying law.”

Nate was as likely to become a lawyer as he was to become the Abominable Snowman. “But writing is Nate’s dream,” Laurel said.

“He has to face facts and live in the real world,” Mom said. “Dreams aren’t going to put food on the table.”

“Nate will give up his dream when pigs fly.”

Mom pressed her lips together, and the three of them sat in awkward silence. Laurel shifted uneasily, and Mom drummed her fingers on the arms of her recliner. Nate, on the other hand, didn’t twitch.

Finally, Laurel asked, “So will you get me that picture?”

Mom stood up as though it took all her effort and headed out of the room.

“Your mom doesn’t think I’m good enough for you,” Nate whispered, lowering his chin to his hand.

“No, you’re perfectly fine,” Laurel said as she gently rubbed his back. “It’s just that Mom doesn’t have any imagination.”

It Won’t Pass for Flowers (flash fiction)

(I wrote this for Three Word Wednesday — more of Laurel and Nate, from my novel-in-progress Heart’s Chalice. These flash fiction pieces, though they take place before the main action of the novel, are not necessarily being written in chronological order.)

Laurel kept her hand on Nate’s knee as he drove them to the trailhead. Nate’s brother, Ian, had moved to Florida six months ago. Aside from one call, no one had heard a word. Since it was Ian’s birthday today, Laurel knew he was weighing heavily on Nate’s mind.

When Laurel and Nate were little kids, Ian had brought them to the mountain for summer picnics. So when Laurel had suggested she and Nate honor Ian by taking a hike on the mountain, Nate had lit up as though she’d flipped a switch.

“Let’s explore,” he said as they parked at the trailhead. “See what we find.”

Sounded great to her.

They got out of Nate’s car and hiked up the trail. Everywhere Laurel looked was a riot of green, every shade imaginable. The mountain laurel, her namesake, was in bloom, delicate blossoms in light pink and white which looked like wedding bouquets.

They reached the area of the forest where they’d picnicked with Ian years ago. They’d never been farther than this. Here, they must choose between three trails.

Nate scratched his chin. “Which one?”

Two of the trails were marked with yellow, indicating well-used horse trails. But the third, unmarked, rose parallel to the creek branch. “Let’s take that one,” Laurel said.

“You have a good feeling about it?”

“I think we’ll run up on something interesting.”

Grinning, Nate picked a laurel blossom and tucked it tidily behind Laurel’s ear.

They hiked on. The trail got steeper, and Laurel wiped sweat off her forehead. If she and Nate kept at this hiking thing, they’d get in better shape. But they were moving on at a pretty good clip. Too good a clip. Nate tripped on a tree root, pitched forward, and broke his fall with his hands.

Laurel caught up to him. “Are you okay?”

“Yeah, I–” he began. His gaze riveted on the brush that lined the trail. “Oh crap.”

Laurel looked. A skunk hunkered with its head lowered and its tail held high. She’d heard somewhere to talk to skunks to calm them down. But what should she say to a skunk?

“Run!” Nate cried.

That was the last thing they should do. “No, no, we need to–”

Before Laurel could finish, Nate scrambled to his feet, kicking up dirt and making one heck of a racket.

She who hesitates is lost. The skunk let loose. Laurel had smelled skunks before, but always from a distance. This skunk was only five feet away. Oh, the stench! It soaked their bare legs and arms, and the front of their shorts and tank tops. Laurel got some of the spray in her mouth and gagged.

“Blargh!” She spat, then clutched at Nate so hard she pulled him down. They tumbled on the trail and landed in the brush. The skunk waddled away as fast as it could go. Laurel and Nate would be lucky if they didn’t get poison ivy. That would be just peachy: the mother of all itches on top of the the mother of all stinks.

Nate roared, his eyes bulging. Scrambling to his hands and knees, he puked on the edge of the trail. Laurel tried breathing through her mouth, but that was even worse. She gagged again.

She flopped back onto her butt. Silence, except for the rustle of branches in wind.

Then Nate brayed laughter. Disbelieving, Laurel turned to look at him. He rolled back and forth on the trail, howling and stinking, stinking and howling. She began to laugh, too, so hard that her tears flowed. She crawled over to Nate and they held each other, shrieking laughter into each other’s reeking shoulders.

When Nate could talk, he said, “Yup, we ran into something interesting, all right.”

“It never occurred to me…” Laurel shrugged, still giggling. Sometimes her premonitions and feelings threw her for a loop.

Or made her stinky.

But something told her to keep hiking. Just a little farther.

“Let’s go back and get rid of this smell,” Nate said. “I’ve got baking soda and hydrogen peroxide–”

“No, let’s go on.”

“What?” he said, goggling at her. “You want to get sprayed by a battalion next?”

She smiled. “Trust me.”

He raised an eyebrow at her, then nodded.

Yup, Nate’s a keeper.

They hiked on up the trail. A faint roar reached Laurel’s ears. Big water. Her entire face broke into a smile. “I was right,” she said, as much to herself as to Nate.

“What?”

“There is something wonderful up here.”

“Wonderful sounds better than interesting.”

“Come on.” She ran up the trail, and Nate followed. The roar got louder; the creek branch grew narrower. The ragged brush by the side of the trail became a tangly laurel thicket.

Laurel and Nate crested a hill. And into Laurel’s view came a waterfall, eight feet high and majestic as water frothed and foamed down into the creek branch.

“Look,” she said, pointing. “A shower.”

Nate chuckled. “If only we had some soap.”

They splashed into the creek branch. Laurel reveled in the water rushing against her legs almost as much as she thrilled to Nate’s warm hug.

No matter how many skunks on their trail, love didn’t stink.

Dreams (flash fiction)

(I wrote this for Sunday Scribblings, prompt “ethics / ethical.”  Here’s more of Laurel and Nate, from my novel-in-progress Heart’s Chalice.  Chronologically, this story takes place before the action of the novel.)

If only Laurel could give Nate a hint. But as Mom said, second sight wasn’t an exact science.

They sat on the soft ground between the cedar trees. The waterfall’s roar was louder here, but they didn’t mind. It seemed a part of their conversation.

“If it helps, I believe in you,” Laurel said.

“But what if I just plain suck?” This morning, Nate had gotten a rejection from Ad Astra, a well-known science fiction magazine.

“You don’t suck. Remember, you got acceptances from both Vortex and Neutrinos.”

“But they’re small potatoes. They’d publish anything.”

“That’s not true,” Laurel said, caressing his knee. “You’re running yourself down again. Stop it.”

The worry-lines in Nate’s forehead smoothed a bit. “Sometimes your faith in me is what keeps me going.”

Laurel picked up a twig and drew random designs in the leaf-litter. With his talent and hard work, surely Nate would build a name for himself as a science-fiction author. From her second sight, she got glints and glimmers of a future for herself in music. But for Nate, all that came through was a question mark.

That wasn’t so weird. Laurel’s visions couldn’t be forced. Nate understood that, in theory, but oh how he angsted, in practice! To his mind, it meant he was destined to fail. If he was this hard on himself at sixteen, he’d drive himself nuts at thirty.

He scooted toward the rightmost cedar tree. “Let’s forget about it and chill out.”

“Sounds good.”

Nate reached the tree and leaned back against it. Laurel moved toward him, then she stopped. The periphery of her sight filled with haze. A vision. But of what? Nate, the tree, the waterfall, the creek branch. Everything was the same.

No, something was changing. As Laurel watched, carvings slowly manifested on the tree’s trunk, above Nate’s head: his and Laurel’s initials, surrounded by a heart and emblazoned, in Nate’s handwriting, with “forever.”

Dimly, Nate’s voice registered. “What’s going on?”

He moved toward her, and the carvings on the tree disappeared. The haze framing her sight whirled in and obscured her view of everything: Nate, the tree, the creek branch. She flopped back on her bottom and looked wildly around. No matter where she tried to focus, it was the same. Nothing but gray. It reminded her of the night she and Nate had hiked in thick fog, unable to see more than five feet in front of them.

The gray disappeared so rapidly that the afternoon sunshine stung her eyes. She groaned and sat back on her bottom.

“Are you okay?” Nate asked.

Laurel didn’t know what to think. She joined him at the tree and snuggled in his arms. “Yeah. I just…” Should she tell him what she’d seen? If the carvings happened, they should be done in their own time. And the fog… who knew? Maybe it meant “be patient.”

“What did you see?” he urged.

She couldn’t tell him.  He’d worry too much, and worrying about mystery – trying to dissect it – only led to more mystery.  And Nate didn’t want mystery.  He wanted answers.

We’ll find out what Nate’s future holds.  Together.

“It was all jumbled up,” she said. “But let’s just say you’re stuck with me.”

He squeezed her close. “That’s the most important thing of all.”

Brothers (flash fiction)

(I wrote this for Three Word Wednesday — more of Nate, from my novel-in-progress Heart’s Chalice. Chronologically, this story takes place before the action of the novel.)

Nate stamped snow off his boots and knocked on Ian’s door. The run-down apartment complex, nestled near snow-capped mountains, was eerily quiet. When Ian didn’t answer, Nate knocked again, only to wait more long, chilly moments. It didn’t bode well.

He hoped he wasn’t too late to see his brother.

Putting his ear to the door, Nate listened. From inside came the sound of shuffling feet and a clatter of aluminum cans hitting the floor, punctuated by slurred curses. Nate let out a long breath. His relief surpassed his disappointment, but just barely.

Nate heard Ian fumbling with the knob, and the door swung open. A one-hundred proof smell rushed out at Nate like the wind howling outside. Nate would hold his nose, but he didn’t want Ian to rag on him as a goody-goody.

“Hey, kid.” Ian flopped onto the filthy, orange couch, one arm dangling off the side. Oh, he looked so like Dad.

“Where’s Melissa?” Nate asked, though he already knew. If Laurel hadn’t told him, the living room would have. Reeking clothes lay piled in a dust-coated recliner. Crushed beer cans and whiskey bottles cluttered the floor. Brownish stains spotted the faded gray tile.

“Huh?” Ian goggled at Nate, barely lucid. “Oh, Melissa. Gone to her momma’s. She ain’t coming back. And I’m blowing this joint, too.”

“Where are you going?”

“I don’t know. Just somewhere.”

“Well, I’ll drive you,” Nate offered. “I got my license last week.”

“I can drive myself.” Shakily, Ian stood, then picked up a jacket from the floor. He shrugged into it and dug in its outer pockets. Then he scrabbled around in his jeans pockets, front and back. His face contorted, and he bellowed a fresh string of curses. Finally, he pulled his keys from an inside pocket in his jacket.

No way was Nate letting Ian on the road. “I’m calling you a cab.”

“Screw you.” Ian headed for the door. He tripped over a lamp cord and fell, sprawling on the floor. With a self-righteous expression, he hauled himself up, making a great show of dusting himself off.

Nate thought of Ian as he’d been ten years ago, before he’d gotten so messed up. Ian had pushed Nate in his swing and built him a treehouse.  They’d caught lightning bugs together, then set them free.

Nate went to the phone. Yes, a dial tone. Thank goodness it hadn’t been cut off. He called a cab for Ian. When he turned back around, Ian’s lips were curled in a dreamy-drunk smile.

“Maybe I’ll go to Florida,” he mused. “All that sunshine.”

It would take more than sunshine to help Ian.

When the cab came, Nate swallowed past the lump in his throat. He’d never see his brother again. Laurel had said that, too, though she couldn’t tell him why. Perhaps Nate and Ian’s paths were diverging too far to come together again.

It made a sad kind of sense. Nate wasn’t about to follow in his big brother’s footsteps.

Undaunted by whiskey breath or body odor, Nate grabbed Ian in a hug. “Take care, big guy. I love you.”

“Yeah. You too, kid.” Ian patted Nate’s shoulder clumsily, then tottered out the door.

Heck, for all Nate knew, Ian had been evicted and didn’t want to tell him. Nate would clean this place up. Throw away the junk, give to charity what he could salvage.

Before he got started, he’d call Laurel.

She picked up on the first ring. “Nate.”

He smiled through his tears. Not all the sunshine in Florida could light him up as much as her voice. “You were right.”

“I’m sorry,” she said. “But I’m glad you got to say goodbye.”